We have got to a CRUCIAL part of the novel where Ivan has promised Ruby he will get her to a zoo. Will he succeed?? Here is a clip of the real Ivan that this novel was based on:
Why do you think Ivan has made such a big commitment to Ruby?
What aspect of Ivan’s personality is revealed by this promise?
Have you ever made a promise that was hard to keep? How did you go?
This week in writing, we have tried our hand at 100 word stories. We had to write only 100 words based on the prompt
But I wondered what I would do …
This has been a great task to help us focus on our choice of words and creating mood in our writing. We voted on the top pieces in our class. Here they are … we hope you enjoy them!
But I wondered what I would do! I fell to the old splintery wood; a rusted nail tore my flesh. Tears swelled in my eyes, a throbbing lump wedged in my throat, enlarged. The words slipped round my mind “What would I do?” I let out an ear piercing scream and covered the wide gash, trying to stop the blood pouring out. My head spun like a spinning top as I slowly wobbled to my feet. The fire place crackled and puffed wispy smoke into the crisp air. The flames licked up any dry wood like a cat drinking milk. I slid my hand up the ancient mantel piece. I knew what I must do.
This was tricky. I jogged to the spot where she lay. Motionless. I gently put one shaky hand to her chest. Beatless. How was I going to save her? Suddenly, I reach for my back pack and take it from my back. Carefully, I lift her head and slide my pack under her. She doesn’t make a sound. Then I realise what I have to do. Slowly, I bend down and put my lips on hers. I blow some air into her mouth then push on her chest. Nothing. Wait, something! She starts breathing! She’s alive! But I wondered what I would do…
But I wondered what I would do. Then it came to me. Run. I ran as fast as possible knowing there was a T-Rex right on my tail. I jumped in to the jeep and slammed on the accelerator causing the jeep to go flying down the road towards safety. The next problem I had was the Spinosarous (which if you ask me stands for killing machine.) I stopped the car and got the dart gun lying in the back and loaded it. I jumped out of the car and pulled the trigger twice watching the mighty beast fall to the floor. At that moment I knew I was safe.
What do you think of our 100 word stories? Where does you mind take you when you hear the phrase “But I wondered what I would do?”
Today we began the first of our Picture Story Book discussion triads. We chose a leader and the leader read his/her story to the group. We then worked together to discuss some of the important elements and features of the book. Some of the things we focused on were:
- characters – their traits, looks, actions, attitudes
- setting – how it impacts the story
- messages contained within the story
- illustrations and their relationship to the text
- rich language
Here are some photos of us in action!
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Do you have a favourite picture story book? What makes it your favourite?